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Saturday, December 17th 2011, 4:07pm

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00:10-00:13 brighter, dumber, older, younger, richer, poorer.
00:13-00:16 and we make all these dimensional distinctions,

There's full stop followed by a lower case.

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Thursday, February 9th 2012, 12:50am

Agree there's a problem here, but to match the speaker's rolling cadence I ended the preceding line with a comma instead, to make one large sentence.


from
brighter, dumber, older, younger, richer, poorer
to
brighter, dumber, older, younger, richer, poorer,


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