If I remember correctly I did the timeshifting for part 2 (and maybe also the transcript). So please, call me Mr. Dunning-Kruger (effect) from now on because I had nearly no knowledge but was very confident in this (lack of) knowledge.
So thank you very much for reworking it. Looks good to me (keep in mind that I lack knowledge ).
Resurrected this dormant vid and am running it thru FR.
Edit: Although I stated at one point that "part 1" could be left undisturbed I have since corrected a couple small typos in part 1, added an intro subtitle, and inserted linebreaks throughout (the new format).