Hier noch ein abschließendes error-reporting für Frage 5 der FAQ:
Is: In the end, the fundamental interest is, again, sustainability and efficiency on all levels, from the "housing
deign" to the "earth design".
Should: In the end, the fundamental interest is, again, sustainability and efficiency on all levels, from the "housing
design" to the "earth design".
Is: Of course, those reading this who have been conditioned into a more individualistic, materialistic mindset often objects with claims such as
" what if I want green, custom golf clubs and only white are available?".
Should: Of course, those reading this who have been conditioned into a more individualistic, materialistic mindset often objects with claims such as
"What if I want green, custom golf clubs and only white are available?".
Is: The fact is, even for those who object from the standpoint of their interest in personal identity, the overarching social ramifications of such
a social approach will create benefits that will greatly overshadow any such arbitrary personal preference, creating new values to replace the outdated ones.
Should: The fact is, even for those who object from the standpoint of their interest in personal identity, the overarching social ramifications of such
an social approach will create benefits that will greatly overshadow any such arbitrary personal preference, creating new values to replace the outdated ones.
Is: You
can not steal something no one owns and you certainly couldn't sell it.
Should: You
cannot steal something no one owns and you certainly couldn't sell it.
Is:
[c) Peak Efficiency of Production:
Should:
c) Peak Efficiency of Production:
Is: … and it is this understanding that can allow us to slow and even stop the aberrant, or "criminal" behavior we see in society today such
a abuse, murder, theft and the like.
Should: … and it is this understanding that can allow us to slow and even stop the aberrant, or "criminal" behavior we see in society today such
as abuse, murder, theft and the like.
Is: There are many brilliant engineers who have worked to tackle the issue of industrial design, from Jacque Fresco, to Buckminster
fuller to
Nicola Tesla.
Should: There are many brilliant engineers who have worked to tackle the issue of industrial design, from Jacque Fresco, to Buckminster
Fuller to
Nikola Tesla.
Is: For example, Fresco's "circular city" is constructed of a series of "belts", each serving a social function, such
a energy production, research, recreation, living, etc.
Should: For example, Fresco's "circular city" is constructed of a series of "belts", each serving a social function, such
as energy production, research, recreation, living, etc.
Is:
Each city is a hence a system, where all needs are produced in the city complex, in a localized fashion, whenever possible.
Should:
Hence each city is a system, where all needs are produced in the city complex, in a localized fashion, whenever possible.
Is: More information on these city
system can be found at
www.thevenusproject.com.
Should: More information on these city
systems can be found at
www.thevenusproject.com.
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